Information Flow — Exercises
Choose the better version
Circle the correct answer.
- Which follows end-weight? (It is clear that the plan will not work. / That the plan will not work is clear. / Clear is that the plan will not work.)
- Which keeps the topic (the castle) as subject? (The castle was built in 1200 and was restored in 1990. / The castle was built in 1200 and someone restored it in 1990. / In 1990 a team restored the castle, built in 1200.)
- "Who wrote Hamlet?" — Which answer puts the new information last? (It was written by Shakespeare. / Shakespeare wrote it. / By Shakespeare it was written.)
- Choose the natural option: (There remain several questions. / Several questions there remain. / Remain several questions.)
- Which puts given information first? (Our hotel was lovely. Its owner was a former chef. / A former chef owned it. Our hotel was lovely. / A former chef, our hotel was lovely.)
- Complete for end-weight: It surprised everyone _____ . (that the shy boy won the debate / the shy boy that won the debate / won the debate the shy boy)
- Choose the clearer sequence: (The app was launched in May. It now has a million users. / The app was launched in May. A million users now use it. / In May the app launched. Now, a million users, they use it.)
- Which uses a cleft for end-focus? (What surprised me was her calm. / Her calm surprised me. / Surprised me her calm.)
Rewrite for flow
Complete the second sentence.
- That he resigned surprised nobody. → surprised nobody that he resigned.
- One problem remains. → There one problem.
- Leonardo painted the Mona Lisa. (end-focus on Leonardo) → The Mona Lisa by Leonardo.
- The film was released in 2019. Critics praised it. (keep the film as subject) → The film was released in 2019 and by critics.
- To understand these results takes time. → takes time to understand these results.
- A huge storm hit the coast yesterday. → Yesterday a huge storm hit the coast. (start with known time)