Information Flow

Information Flow

Reference

Rule Example
given → newknown topic first, new information lastAmong the speakers is …
end-weightit-extraposition / there + verbIt was a shock that …
end-focuspassive or cleft to put key item last… won by Marie Curie
topic chainingkeep the same subjectIt houses … it was extended …

Common mistakes

  1. A long-awaited and controversial report was released yesterday. → Yesterday saw the release of a long-awaited and controversial report.
    heavy subject → move it to the end
  2. That she had won was surprising to everyone. → It was surprising to everyone that she had won.
    it-extraposition
  3. The bridge opened in 1932. Engineers repaired it in 1990. → The bridge opened in 1932 and was repaired in 1990.
    keep the topic as subject
  4. There is remaining one problem. → There remains one problem.
    there + verb

Information Flow — Exercises

Choose the better version

Circle the correct answer.

  1. Which follows end-weight? (It is clear that the plan will not work. / That the plan will not work is clear. / Clear is that the plan will not work.)
  2. Which keeps the topic (the castle) as subject? (The castle was built in 1200 and was restored in 1990. / The castle was built in 1200 and someone restored it in 1990. / In 1990 a team restored the castle, built in 1200.)
  3. "Who wrote Hamlet?" — Which answer puts the new information last? (It was written by Shakespeare. / Shakespeare wrote it. / By Shakespeare it was written.)
  4. Choose the natural option: (There remain several questions. / Several questions there remain. / Remain several questions.)
  5. Which puts given information first? (Our hotel was lovely. Its owner was a former chef. / A former chef owned it. Our hotel was lovely. / A former chef, our hotel was lovely.)
  6. Complete for end-weight: It surprised everyone _____ . (that the shy boy won the debate / the shy boy that won the debate / won the debate the shy boy)
  7. Choose the clearer sequence: (The app was launched in May. It now has a million users. / The app was launched in May. A million users now use it. / In May the app launched. Now, a million users, they use it.)
  8. Which uses a cleft for end-focus? (What surprised me was her calm. / Her calm surprised me. / Surprised me her calm.)

Rewrite for flow

Complete the second sentence.

  1. That he resigned surprised nobody. →   surprised nobody that he resigned.
  2. One problem remains. → There   one problem.
  3. Leonardo painted the Mona Lisa. (end-focus on Leonardo) → The Mona Lisa   by Leonardo.
  4. The film was released in 2019. Critics praised it. (keep the film as subject) → The film was released in 2019 and   by critics.
  5. To understand these results takes time. →   takes time to understand these results.
  6. A huge storm hit the coast yesterday. → Yesterday   a huge storm hit the coast. (start with known time)

Information Flow — Answer Key

Choose the better version

  1. It is clear that the plan will not work. — it-extraposition puts the heavy clause last.
  2. The castle was built in 1200 and was restored in 1990. — Topic chaining with the passive.
  3. It was written by Shakespeare. — End-focus: the new information (Shakespeare) last.
  4. There remain several questions. — there + verb delays the subject.
  5. Our hotel was lovely. Its owner was a former chef. — Given (our hotel) first, new (former chef) last.
  6. that the shy boy won the debate — it … that-clause at the end.
  7. The app was launched in May. It now has a million users. — Same subject (the app) → clearer.
  8. What surprised me was her calm. — Pseudo-cleft puts the focus (her calm) last.

Rewrite for flow

  1. It
  2. remains
  3. was painted
  4. was praised
  5. It
  6. saw