Writing

The Academic Essay

CPE discursive writing · 180–220 words · formal register · argumentation

The C2 Proficiency essay

Writing Part 1 — compulsory

Task
read two short texts on the same topic; summarise and evaluate the key points of both
Length
240–280 words
Register
formal, impersonal, precise
Must have
both texts summarised in your own words · your evaluation · a clear position

Structure

Four paragraphs

Introduction
the shared topic and how the two texts differ
Text 1
its main point in your own words + your evaluation
Text 2
its main point in your own words + your evaluation
Conclusion
your own reasoned position, drawing both together

Language for summarising and evaluating

Report, then judge

Reporting
The first writer contends that… · The second text maintains that…
Contrasting
By contrast, … · Whereas the first writer…, the second…
Evaluating
This claim is largely persuasive. · The writer arguably underestimates…
Concluding
On balance, I would argue that… · The two positions are less incompatible than they appear.

Model

Find the summary of each text and the evaluation

An essay — 257 words
Both texts address the role of technology in education, yet they reach strikingly different conclusions. The first argues that digital tools have democratised learning, giving students access to resources that were once available only to a privileged few. The second, by contrast, contends that constant connectivity has eroded the capacity for sustained concentration, which it regards as the foundation of genuine understanding.

The first writer's claim is, in my view, largely persuasive. A student in a remote village can now watch lectures from world-leading universities, consult vast digital libraries and practise a language with native speakers on another continent. It would be difficult to overstate the significance of this shift. Nevertheless, the writer arguably underestimates the extent to which access depends on reliable internet connections and suitable devices, which remain unevenly distributed.

The second text raises a concern that is harder to dismiss. There is growing evidence that frequent switching between tasks impairs memory and deep reading, and anyone who has tried to read a demanding novel with a phone nearby will recognise the problem. However, the writer's conclusion that schools should therefore minimise the use of technology seems unduly pessimistic. The difficulty lies not in the tools themselves but in the way they are used.

On balance, I would argue that the two positions are less incompatible than they first appear. Technology undoubtedly widens access to knowledge, but it does so most effectively when students are also taught how to manage their attention. Rather than choosing between connectivity and concentration, schools should aim to cultivate both.

Common mistakes

Where candidates lose marks

Copying phrases from the texts
→
Paraphrase: "democratised learning" → "made education available to far more people"
use your own words
Summarising only one text
→
Cover the key point of both texts
both are required
Giving opinions with no evaluation of the texts
→
The writer arguably underestimates…
evaluate the writers' arguments
I think it is very bad.
→
This position seems unduly pessimistic.
precise, formal evaluation

Your turn

Say it first, then write it

Practise out loud.

1
Your teacher reads two short opinions on homework. Summarise each in one sentence.
2
Evaluate each: what is convincing, what is missing?
3
Give your own position, drawing on both.
4
Paraphrase three key phrases from the texts.

Recap

Summarise
both texts, own words
The first writer contends…
Evaluate
strengths + weaknesses
arguably underestimates…
Position
reasoned, balanced
On balance, I would argue…
Length
240–280 words
formal register
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