Ch 5

Review

CPE review · evaluative language · recommendation · 220–260 words

The C2 review

Writing Part 2 — for a magazine or website

Purpose
give readers a vivid, balanced impression and a clear verdict
Length
280–320 words
Register
engaging and sophisticated; a confident personal voice
Must have
title · vivid description · detailed evaluation · reservations · recommendation

Structure

Five parts

Title
Worth the Hype? The Glass Garden Exhibition
Opening
context and your overall impression
Highlights
what makes it special, with sensory detail
Reservations
what lets it down
Verdict
who should go, and a practical tip

C2 descriptive and evaluative language

Vivid and precise

Vivid description
rise from the floor and hang from the iron roof · from cool blues to fiery oranges
Praise
genuinely breathtaking · well conceived · a refreshingly honest touch
Criticism
let down by its organisation · uncomfortably crowded · disappointingly limited
Verdict
These frustrations do little to diminish… · I would wholeheartedly recommend…

Model

Find the highlights, the reservations and the tip

A review — 311 words
Worth the Hype? The Glass Garden Exhibition

Few exhibitions have generated as much anticipation this year as The Glass Garden, which has transformed the city's old railway station into a vast, glittering greenhouse of glass sculptures. Having finally visited last weekend, I can report that it is, for the most part, every bit as dazzling as its publicity suggests, though not without one or two shortcomings.

The exhibition's central achievement is its sense of scale. Visitors enter through a narrow tunnel before emerging into the main hall, where more than three hundred glass flowers, some taller than a person, rise from the floor and hang from the iron roof. As the light shifts throughout the day, the colours change from cool blues to fiery oranges, an effect that is genuinely breathtaking. What is particularly impressive is the attention to detail: up close, each petal reveals tiny bubbles and imperfections that make the sculptures feel organic rather than mechanical.

The smaller rooms devoted to the artists' working methods are similarly well conceived. Short films showing the glass being blown and shaped help to demystify the process, and the decision to include a few failed pieces, cracked and misshapen, is a refreshingly honest touch.

That said, the exhibition is let down by its organisation. Timed tickets are supposed to limit numbers, yet the main hall felt uncomfortably crowded, and the explanatory labels were often too small to read without queuing. The café, moreover, is overpriced and offers a disappointingly limited menu.

These frustrations, however, do little to diminish what is, at heart, a remarkable experience. I would wholeheartedly recommend The Glass Garden to anyone with an interest in art or design, and indeed to those who simply want to be amazed. Go early on a weekday morning, though, if you want to see the flowers rather than the backs of other visitors' heads.

Common mistakes

Where candidates lose marks

It was really good and nice.
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genuinely breathtaking · refreshingly honest
precise and vivid
Only description
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What is particularly impressive is…
evaluate as well as describe
No reservations
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That said, the exhibition is let down by…
balance
Weak ending
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Go early on a weekday morning, though, if…
end with a verdict and a tip

Your turn

Say it first, then write it

Review out loud.

1
Describe an event you attended in vivid detail.
2
What was particularly impressive?
3
What let it down?
4
Give a verdict and one practical tip.

Recap

Title
intriguing
Worth the Hype?
Describe
vivid, sensory
from cool blues to fiery oranges
Evaluate
highlights + reservations
let down by its organisation
Verdict
recommendation + tip
Go early on a weekday