Writing

The Review

Informed opinion · balanced evaluation · recommendation · semi-formal · 220–260 words

The C1 Advanced review

Writing Part 2 — for a magazine or website

Purpose
describe and evaluate something, then recommend it (or not)
Length
220–260 words
Register
semi-formal: engaging and personal, never casual
Must have
title · brief description · balanced evaluation · clear recommendation

Structure

Four parts

Title
Echoes of the Deep — Worth Diving Into?
Introduction
what it is and your first impression
Evaluation
strengths and weaknesses, with specific details
Recommendation
who it is for — and who it is not for

C1 evaluative language

Go beyond good and bad

Praise
What is particularly striking is… · compelling · evocative · beautifully crafted
Criticism
That said, … · not without its flaws · slightly clumsy · repetitive
Balance
On balance, these are minor criticisms of an otherwise outstanding…
Recommending
I would highly recommend it to…, although… may find it…

Model

Find the description, the strengths, the flaws and the verdict

A review — 238 words
Echoes of the Deep — Worth Diving Into?

Having heard so much praise for Echoes of the Deep, the latest underwater adventure game, I approached it with high expectations. For the most part, I was not disappointed.

The game follows Mara, a young marine biologist searching for her missing father in a vast, mysterious ocean. What is particularly striking is the visual design: the coral reefs glow with colour, and the deeper you dive, the more unsettling and atmospheric the world becomes. The soundtrack, which shifts subtly as you explore, is equally impressive and adds enormously to the sense of isolation.

The narrative is another strength. Rather than relying on lengthy cut-scenes, the story unfolds through messages and objects you discover, which makes you feel genuinely involved in solving the mystery. Mara herself is a compelling and believable protagonist.

That said, the game is not without its flaws. The controls can feel slightly clumsy in tight spaces, and a few of the puzzles in the later chapters are frustratingly repetitive. At around twelve hours, it is also rather short for the price.

On balance, however, these are minor criticisms of an otherwise outstanding experience. Echoes of the Deep is thoughtful, beautifully crafted and refreshingly different from the action-packed games that dominate the market. I would highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys exploration and story-driven games, although players looking for fast-paced action may find it a little too slow.

Common mistakes

Where candidates lose marks

It was amazing and awesome.
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What is particularly striking is the visual design.
precise, evaluative vocabulary
Retelling the whole story
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One or two sentences of description, then evaluation
a review evaluates
Only praise
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That said, the game is not without its flaws.
balance makes you credible
No recommendation
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I would highly recommend it to anyone who…
always give a verdict

Your turn

Say it first, then write it

Review something out loud, then write it.

1
Choose a film, series, game, book or restaurant. What is your title?
2
Describe it in two sentences.
3
What is particularly striking? What are its flaws?
4
Who would you recommend it to — and who not?

Recap

Title
engaging, specific
Worth Diving Into?
Describe
brief
The game follows…
Evaluate
strengths + flaws, with details
That said, …
Verdict
who it is for
I would highly recommend it to…
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