Este es mi amigo Carlos. Es alto con el pelo corto y oscuro. Es muy divertido y amable. Trabaja como cocinero. En su tiempo libre, juega al fútbol. Lo admiro porque trabaja mucho y siempre hace reír a la gente.
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This is my friend Carlos. He is tall with short dark hair. He is very funny and kind. He works as a chef. In his free time, he plays football. I admire him because he works very hard and always makes people laugh.
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1. Presentación
This is my...
This is my sister Ana.
2. Apariencia
He/She is... / has...
She is tall with long brown hair.
3. Personalidad
He/She is very...
She is very patient and intelligent.
4. Trabajo/hobby
She works as... / He enjoys...
She works as a teacher. She loves reading.
5. Opinión
I admire her because...
I admire her because she helps everyone.
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He have blue eyes.
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He has blue eyes.
En tercera persona del singular (he/she/it) se usa has, no "have".
She is 25 years.
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She is 25 years old.
En inglés siempre se dice years old, nunca solo "years".
He is very much friendly.
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He is very friendly.
Con adjetivos descriptivos, no se usa "much". Solo very, really, quite, etc.
I like him because is kind.
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I like him because he is kind.
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